Your hair, and what we found in it

it was shorter, before.

now, it's long, and worn up,

in a tight bun,

or down, 

across your shoulders.

and only when you're sleeping,

yr back turned,

and only when it's impossibly quiet,

and only if you move,

slowly,

and reach, 

gently,

only then,

your fingers reaching deep inside,

will you find:

a clutch of friendly snakes,

7 tiny dinosaurs speaking french,

an explosion of pastel balloons,

each balloon tied to a string 

of spun sugar. 

Rainbows. 

Seven single hairs,

More silver than gray,

Each cross-section of which

Contains 29 years of 

technicolor yesterday's,

Woven, tight, in a bird's nest,

And inside,

Six robin's eggs,

Each opening infinitely

Like so many nesting dolls. 

A pot of candied gold. 

24 dreams of spectacular tomorrows. 

Buckets and buckets

Of brimming promise. 

Old cameras,

Rusty nails & 

Broken flashbulbs. 

2 dollars, 63 cents

(in Icelandic kronor).

A real, live jackelope;

a pint jar of powdered

(sustainably harvested) narwhal tusk. 

And a million brilliant tomorrows,

Bundled neatly and ready to open,

As needed, some day when it's raining,

And the sun needs you. 

Your house in the trees

You live in bird houses, now;

I visit you there,

these late summer nights,

in the heights. 

Brown bags & fire hydrants,

the constant chesty drone,

tiny rooms,

ice blue against the heavy green. 

Are you happier there,

than you were before?

Still,

you're there when I close my eyes at night and open them in the morning and in the dreams, throughout. 

You live in bird houses now. 

I wish you'd fly away. 

You've stained everything,

the things you've ruined. 

I wish you wouldn't, and hope,

someday—you won't. 

When you come down,

from your house in the trees,

and I read to you,

warbly, trembling, finally—

this life, without you. 

You live in birdhouses now,

in the trees, in the thorns. 

Look down. 

There's magic, here,

too. 

It was the wind, that woke us.

It was in the wind that woke us;

in the cold that lingered, 

these months since. 

Not yet gone,

and yet—

it was in the voice of birds,

their bitter song,

those early mornings,

running from memory,

from the reminders,

everywhere, 

and yet,

there was nothing left. 

A chill filled the air,

the rain misted down,

the darkness came,

and yet,

there was something left. 

There had to be. 

Or else, 

"Why?"

Why?

To give again.

to give way—

to lusty abandon.

To chase,

to reach,

to fall short,

again. 

And yet—

this prayer,

these lips,

this swollen tongue. 

Our screams in the void,

never meeting,

never filled. 

Lumps

It's waking up,

the uncomfortable bolus

there, again. 

Swallow, turn it over,

push against tooth and gum. 

Chew and swallow again. 

Choke it down. 

It stays in your throat,

Your chest. 

It stays there, mostly,

rising on occasion,

pushed back throughout,

Until—

There's nothing you can do,

about your dreams. 

Calcify, harden

& swell.  

You wake,

indulge,

chew over,

swallow hard,

again,

and hope it keeps. 

Oxytocin, someday, again.

"It's the dopamine,"

she said. 

And she was right, but more than that—

the shock of seeing his thoughts, reflected. 

Somewhere, behind her eyes,

an inner life that seemed 

familiar. 

That terrified. 

He missed having an other. 

Her smell, her touch—

The electric avenues,

the swelling horns

that seemed to rise

and fall,

with her presence. 

And her radio silence,

since...

The dopamine. 

The dope, I mean. 

The edge of it all,

But—

If was softer, before. 

Softened. 

Immediate.

A dream, or a lie. 

It was a certainty,

made untrue. 

And the question became,

The question became,

The question was—

Could this body possibly be,

       his body?

Could this grow,

and shape, and change?

Or burn up,

or slow fade?

Tear away, 

and break apart. 

This body, your body. 

Our body. 

The impossibility of it all. 

Remembering and forgetting.

Erasing to find. 

Collapse, to rise. 

This mind, your mind.

Our mind. 

Bonnie "Prince" Billy, Columbus Circle, Feb. 7 2013

Ok, so it's been a minute. Here's a new one.


through the gauzy carapace,
framed & broken,
hanging over Columbus,
the passing tails
of taxis, taxis, taxis.
the flash of siren, reflected
above the circle,
the constant flicker of candle light,
three per table,
shimmering smaller circles,
and always the shooting stars, below;
in the middle distance, streetlights.
and further,
still smaller points of yellow,
each apartment randomized
on the horizon,
their tenants unaware of the watchers above.
and watching all of us,
the gold and green orbs,
the triangles of light,
the striking red--
crosshatched, bisecting lines,
everything overlaid.
and the secret space, in a town
that cherishes its secrets,
those hidden spaces over everything.

he sang.
above the cars, above the streets, above the trees
littering the park, below.
above the diners across the mall,
who may
or mayn’t
be admiring
the private wonder
of their own secret space.
he sang.
and behind him, suspended,
reflected, he sang again,
and again, further still,
close enough to almost touch Columbus
just barely, on the plaza,
he sang at last.

the constant rain of lights,
the gauzy specter of a city
returned to, soon enough,
and so much grander,
remembering,
we’d never left.

One poem, two versions

I wrote this poem in response to a call for poems about "firsts." Then my computer keyboard died and I had to take it to the Geek Squad, and they kept it for three weeks. This poem was the only one I'd written but not saved online. So I wrote a second version. Here they are, ver. 1 and ver. 2. Tomorrow I'll edit both and see what happens.


Ver. One

We were on our way

to Cooperstown.

I sat in the back,

sulking. More baseball.

But up the road,

through the rolling green,

on the left--

the car slowed

and Dad pulled over

to look at antiques.

I remember wood,

gray with age.

Farm equipment.

And an old man--

Tall, suspenders,

gray with ruddy cheeks.

Whispering to my brother,

"Nick, look, it's Santa!"

And we followed him through the maze

of rusted gray, our stage whispers increasingly loud,

and when he noticed, finally,

he knelt down and held his arms out,

and asked us what we'd like

for Christmas.

You can't wrap a bicycle,

not once it's outside the box, anyway.

So imagine:

lying awake for hours,

hoping to catch his entry,

but eventually we're asleep

and up at first light

we sneak downstairs

and there, under the tree, the paper,

hung loosely over what can only be

two bicycles. And when we finally wake

our parents, and the coffee's made

and the green light given,

we tear the paper off

and stand back to admire a minute

the black and red frame,

the number plate in front,

just like a proper BMX,

only with our ages,

my 6 and Nick's 5,

and that was more

than proof enough.

Ver. 2

The rolling green

of the north west Catskills,

from the smudged window

of a speeding caravan,

bound for Cooperstown,

for Baseball again.

But on the left,

we pull off the road,

a pause for antiques,

to fill out Father's vision

of Country Living,

the scattered lawn, full

of farm detritus—rusted wheels

and iron rooster weather vanes.

We chase each other

through an accidental maze,

until we see him:

Gray hair, pot belly.

Red Suspenders,

a full beard.

Our almost whispers

not quiet enough,

he comes to us,

kneeling and asks,

“So what would you like,

for Christmas this year?”

That Christmas eve,

we stayed up as late as we could,

hoping to catch him in the act,

and when we awoke those few hours later,

snuck downstairs where the tree

was half covered with presents,

and at the front,

the two largest shapes,

draped with sheets and sheets

of wrapping paper,

but unmistakable all the same.

We ran upstairs, to wake the parents,

and dragging them, bleary

from their warm cocoon,

tore off the paper

of our new bikes,

shiny BMXs, with number plates,

5 for Nick and 6 for me,

and that

was proof enough.

Our House

I woke up late this morning, my head pounding with the infection that so often takes up residence in my sinuses, despite the surgery, compounded probably by the exposed nerves of my second molar, top right (the root canal is on Friday; I've given up a chance to road trip through the south west to LA to do the responsible thing and fix my tooth).

I drank coffee at the coffee drinking table, and ate a bowl of flax and amaranth corn flakes, sweetened with Agave nectar, because I used to be punk rock, but now I shop at Whole Foods and Fairway, and take Fish Oil supplements, in spite of my lack of steady income.

The siren call of which I fight every day. Health insurance that isn't Cobra. Money to spare every week. Money to save, if I can figure out a way not to spend it all on toys from Apple, on accessories for my Weber Smokey Mountain, on hydraulic fluid electricity generating bicycle trainers, on new motorcycles.

I read in the New Yorker that a social gathering once a month brought an increase in happiness equivalent to doubling your salary. I would love to believe that, deep deep deep within me.

I would not have this time at my desk, surrounded by books and pictures and two computers and cats and music and long leisurely mornings writing and drinking coffee and watching tv, and running errands if it comes to it. I wouldn't have my writing group.

I wouldn't have the fear of where the next job is coming from and will I make my rent and keep my health insurance.

But I spit poetry and prose, when I write, I do. Less so when I'm working, granted--then I wake up and I do my ablutions and work and come home and read and sleep and watch television on the internet.

But when I'm off...

I said I wouldn't explain my poems, but this is my poem. All of it.


Our House

When we grow up

there will be a place for us.

Wooded--not quite suburban

but near enough (for jobs, and such).

Birds through morning quiet,

rain on skylights. Dark coffee.

A clearing with a house,

and outbuildings.

And stepping onto the porch

in my long johns,

and boots open at the top,

I watch the air cloud at my mouth.

The day begins,

in our place.

But first,

a way to get there.

Autumn Sky Poetry Submission Revision

I received some generous criticism from an editor with whom I had what may have been the first ever twitter feud involving an online poetry journal. I tried a couple of major cuts with "Sylvia," which I think improve the poem greatly. I made a minor revision to the last line of "Sundries." As for "Your English Background," and "The Gift," they were described as, "more like descriptive lists than poems to me. There was no human connection, no point. They're lovely exercises in the use of language and imagery, but I'm usually looking for something more." 

I agree, to some extent with "The Gift." I'm not entirely happy with the way the poem turned out. I'll describe my intent, only because this blog is an exercise in revision and feedback and, as a think I say somewhere in the blog "description," an "online workshop." So this is the part where I get to defend my work, explain my intent, and see if it resonates or not. I have no problem accepting a poem as failed, if the intent is lost, or so vague that the reader draws nothing from it. 

My intent with "The Gift" was too address my fear of giving too much of myself to Kristina. It's about the parts of myself that I'm afraid to let go of. It's about giving myself to her, but telling her that there are parts of me that she can never touch. Maybe that's using poetry as therapy, just so much sorting through personal garbage that it doesn't resonate on a public level.

As far as "Your English Background," I personally think there is a very clear narrative arc--the cycle of nature, of land shaped by man and nature's struggle to reclaim lost ground. The femininity of the earth. My fiancée's English background and how that ancient history informs her present in small ways and not so small ways. Our disconnect from our past. Again, that's my intention, but if it's not clear ... of course, it doesn't have to be completely clear--poetry is subjective, but if there's no emotional pull, it doesn't work. 

I've left the two poems I just described as they are. I'm interested in other people's considerations/feedback. If you'd like to compare the previous versions of "Sylvia" and "The Gift," I'll post them as a comment.

Your English Background

You, the land.
Razed and plowed,
deep furrows running through
where forest once stood.

And now,
second growth
in scattered poles--
bracken, peat and bog,
high winds of highlands.

You bear the heft
of Sarsen,
dragged across the windy plain,
land shaped like blue stone,
bit by bit
until

having chipped away,
the edges no longer sharp
but shorn by patient hands,
you gave witness,
watchman like,
ghastly Cerberus;
Avon, Lethe or Styx,
no matter:

You,
this foreign land.

Shaped by man,
reclaimed at last,
sprung
from your forever womb.

The Gift

I am everything

inside this box,

felt lined,

blood red.

Lacquered mahogany,

fancifully etched

by some careful hand

with images of swirling demons

beneath

a veil of mist.

You have the key,

but you dare not open the box.

You the disease,

You the cure.

Pandora,

I am what's inside.

But you can not look;

only cherish this box:

intricately carved,

polished, finished to a high gloss

that blood red hinting

at depths and depths.

You have the key;

you have the box.

I am inside--

patience.

You, the disease.

You, the cure.

Hope

is what's left behind.

Sylvia

Sylvia Plath,
I went in for Ariel,

but the copy in stock was hardcover, glossy,
and there next to it were your collected works,
1956-1963,
poems you’d written right up until that final cold February,
just days before my birthday,

that you stuck your head in the oven.

You were thirty.
You had two children.
Your husband left you for another woman
because you couldn't fix yourself
and when she couldn't fix herself
he didn't leave

but she went out
just as you did.

I try to calculate how may poems you wrote
between twenty six and thirty one
and how many I've written up to now,
and how they’d stack up.

Ted Hughes said Sylvia never scrapped a poem once written.
She approached her writing with an artisan dedication--
if she couldn't make a table, she’d settle for a chair,
an ottoman, an end table. Sylvia Plath?

And for me,
Poems like whittled spoons for stirring beans over camp fires;
Bent brass door handles fitted over the steel drum body of a bullet smoker;
Glued together mugs full of pencils and wooden beads,
an old triumph badge and bent safety pins.

A drop in the ocean.

No more. No less.

Sundries

The orchid on the table is dying;

shriveled leaves curling back into itself.

Someone could have changed the water,

but there were other things to attend to:

the dishes in the sink, for instance.

The hairball in the middle of the bedroom.

Visiting friends in the country,

and wondering at the lack of clutter in their homes:

"They have more space," I said.

and I meant it then, but now wonder.

We could have that space, if we wanted it.

but there is a pushing against,

and the space between

can not be filled.

Things are crowded out,

little things--

the pile of clothes at the foot of our bed,

the flower, curled and dry on the table.

Longing to be filled,

we push towards each other,

only to be repelled

by the space between.

The orchid on the table is dying,

a sort of beauty in its curling leaves.