Monday, November 8, 2010

the house

 second draft, minor changes.

the house

there is a house on fire.
white, horizontal beams,
smoke curling over expansive green
the sound of lawnmowers buzz buzzing
stop for a moment to watch the flames
rise.


this fire
has been years in the making.
it built up from within the walls,
unnoticed for so long,
the white paint
showing no indication
of the fire within
until 


fire born from cold
silent dinners
resentment simmering
subtle explosions
of pure rage
an eternity of contempt
surfacing
beams smoldering from within
and the paint begins to peel,
blistering,
bubbling,
square inch
by square inch
and reaching the corner
where wall meets ceiling
falling in sheets to the floor,
the carpet goes next
singed at the edges
and then unstoppable.


he drinks alone now.
the den
with the picture window
the fire closing in
on him
and follows her path,
there on the hill,
by the tree,
smoking cigarettes
and watching 
this final burning.


she walks the perimeter,
where lawn meets wood
past gentle slopes of leaf litter
and grass trimmings
and down to gravel
to asphalt
to mailbox and car
and up again,
leaning against the tree,
smoking cigarettes
and watching
this final burn.


it’s finished now,
the eventual blossoming
the blessed conflagration
that made an end,
but no phoenix rising
and no revelation.

just this:
a woman, smoking,
watching the charred remains.
a man, drinking, 
sitting among them.

Charles Imbelli
2010

1 comment:

  1. first draft

    the house


    there is a house on fire.

    white, horizontal beams,

    smoke curling over expansive green

    the sound of lawnmowers buzz buzzing

    stop for a moment and watch the flames

    rise.


    this fire

    has been years in the making.

    it built up from within the walls,

    unnoticed for so long,

    the white paint of the walls

    showing no indication

    of the fire within

    until


    fire born from cold

    silent dinners

    resentment simmering

    subtle explosions

    of pure rage

    an eternity of contempt

    surfacing

    the paint begins to peel,

    blistering

    bubbling

    square inch

    by square inch

    and reaching the corner

    where wall meets ceiling

    falling in sheets to the floor,

    the carpet goes next

    singed at the edges

    and then unstoppable.


    he drinks alone now.

    the den

    with the picture window

    the fire closing in

    and watches her

    there on the hill,

    by the tree,

    smoking cigarettes

    and watching his slow burn.


    she walks the perimeter,

    where lawn meets wood

    past gentle slopes of leaf litter

    and grass trimmings

    and down to gravel

    to asphalt

    to mailbox and car

    and up again,

    leaning against the tree,

    smoking cigarettes

    and watching the slow burn.


    it’s finished now,

    the eventual blossoming

    the blessed conflagration

    that made an end,

    and no phoenix rising

    and no revelation.


    just this:

    a woman, smoking,

    watching the charred remains.

    a man, drinking,

    sitting among them.

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